FCE essay example: Do you think adventure tourism in unexplored parts of the world should be encouraged?

Do you think adventure tourism in unexplored parts of the world should be encouraged?

Notes:

Write about:
– effects of tourism
– personal risks
– …life experience…. (your own idea)

Sample answer:
Going on an adventure can be exciting but dangerous at the same time. This is why my opinion about this issue is divided.
Firstly, exploring wild life can be seriously damaging for the environment. Most tourists are unfortunately careless and disrespectful towards wild animals and the planet by littering the area they visit. Creating nuisance by smoking or being obnoxiously loud can impact and disturb the wildlife. 
Moreover, going to a jungle or North Pole can be very dangerous. So many accidents could have been avoided, if only people hadn’t decided to act on an impulse and pursue their dreams so damaging not only to themselves but also local inhabitants.  Sometimes, nothing can prepare explores for the hurdles of an adventure, not even the strenuous physical and mental regime they had undergone before the expedition.

However, let’s face it, adventure tourism is guarantees a lifetime experience and provides a great opportunity to see different places. If you are motivated, brave and lust for knowledge, you should definitely go for it.
To conclude, I think adventure tourism must be encouraged if people are informed of what they are about to experience.